Matt Bellamy

I adore this. The imagery and the words you choose to describe it with are really original and interesting. I love how every part is a snapshot of something different ...

I like this but there are parts of it that I just don't understand and they seem a little unnecessary. Let's have a look: Everybody has a reason a reason ...

I quite like this poem but I'm not sure what your point is. What exactly are you trying to say with this poem? I mean, I like the way it's ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Make sure you review other people's work as well as posting your own, as that way you'll get more critiques. :) This is pretty good. You ...

This is an interesting poem. I like how it leaves the reader wondering and able to come to their own conclusions about what it really is, and that it could ...

This is a very emotional and well-written piece, I really like it. However there are a couple of things I think could be better: So what do I do? I ...

Hey! I quite like this but I have a few nitpicks so I'll take it line by line: Like at war, in love everything’s fair. Then again, they say, love ...

Hi! Well done on trying this style of poetry, personally I find it very difficult and don't like writing like that at all, but you've done it quite well. I'm ...

This is interesting. I have a few nitpicks - you spelt "definitely" wrong, so make sure you use a spell-check before you post. Also, the second line sounds unnecessary. I ...

I really like this. I think it flowed well and the rhyming was great. At times I felt forced into saying a line in a certain way, but only once ...

Hi! I quite liked this. I like the way you combined short and longer lines - normally this might disrupt the flow of the poem but here I think it ...

Hi again! I feel the same way about this poem as I did about the one I just reviewed of yours - it's good, but it's very short. I do ...

Hi! I think this is very sweet. It rhymes very well and flows nicely, and it's quite cute. I think the exclamation point at the end also adds to this ...

:lol: I like haiku, and I particularly like this one. It made me laugh. I suppose read outloud it doesn't really sound like a haiku - it's not very poetic, ...

Hey! I like the second poem and since haiku are a little difficult to critique, I can't really find anything wrong with it. It sounds good. However the first haiku ...